Have a look at what we created as a class:
“It happened again,” thought Mr.
Francis.
Mr. Francis bought the old
decrepit house five years ago. They said it was haunted. Of course, Mr. Francis
– having been a scientist for 20 years of his life – didn’t believe in such
nonsense.
Until now.
After Mr. Francis bought the
house on Wright Street,
he began to hear strange noises. At first, he wasn’t too bothered. Until it
started getting worse.
The house shook. The power
went out.
Then...came the voices.
Will Mr. Francis figure out
this mystery or will he go insane…
We've given just enough information to hook the reader, but we don't want to give away too much information.